This week's treat to help you remember I exist (and that I'm a writer) is a flashback post with a bit of sweet romance I enjoyed re-reading. I hope you do, too.
Under the Oak. A story in 10 very short chapters.
I
The car coasted to a stop under a big oak that shadowed the pull-out. The
lights went out. It was invisible from the road, even if there had been any
traffic to see it. At ten on a Tuesday night, no one would drive down that
road.
"Is this the place?"
"Close as I can tell. I wasn't paying as much attention as I might have,
last time."
The passenger peered through the window into the darkness outside. "I
can't make it out. I just can't tell."
"You'll see," said the driver. "It'll come back to you." He
turned the key, and the motor died. The sounds and scents of a summer night
came in through the open windows in the sudden quiet. The other time had been autumn.
II
It was 1959. In some places, the country was gearing up to the Sixties. In
Boondocks, the Fifties were just getting into full swing. The girls at
Boondocks High were into roller skates, poodle skirts, and saddle shoes. The
boys wore button-down shirts and ties to school. They smoked behind the
bleachers, but only tobacco. Other things also happened behind the bleachers. When
a girl "went to live with an aunt" everyone knew what had happened,
but they pretended they didn't. They still held sock-hops in the gym on Friday
nights.
III
Calvin Bergen had lived in Chicago until the start of his Senior year. Then his
father took the chance to leave his job, which paid well but would never go
anywhere, and go run the Boondocks distributorship. It was a huge advance, even
though he took a pay cut to do it. That didn't matter, because living in
Boondocks cost next to nothing. And he was his own boss. That made him happy.
Calvin also liked being his own boss, and deeply resented being dragged to
Boondocks.
IV
After a few weeks at Boondocks High, Calvin changed his mind. In Chicago he'd
been one punk among many, chasing whatever was cool. In Boondocks he was the
master of all things Big City, which was to say, all things Cool. When he
showed up at school in a white t-shirt with a pack of cigarettes rolled up in
the sleeve, the next day half the boys copied him. Mostly they took off their
shirts and ties after leaving home, in the hopes that their parents wouldn't
find out.
It took two more days for the Principal to announce a rule prohibiting the
wearing of t-shirts in school.
V
Calvin came to school with no shirt at all, and was suspended for three days.
VI
Dottie Calhoun was a straight A student. Her father owned the farm supply
store, and she had more pocket-money than any other girl. She was generous, so
in spite of being rich, she was popular with the girls as well as the boys. The
teachers called on her first because she always had her work done.
In twelve years of schooling, Dottie had never seen the Principal except
socially. Dottie was pretty, smart, and terribly afraid of doing anything
wrong. She dated all the boys--once. She always turned down a second date. Midway
through her Junior year she'd started to repeat, having run out of boys before
she ran out of Friday nights, but she still didn’t go with any boy twice in a
row.
VII
Dottie noticed Calvin as soon as he arrived at Boondocks High. He wasn't
especially handsome, but he had the glamor of distant places and the Big City. Even
before the t-shirt episode everyone knew he was a rebel and a born leader.
In History class, when he was tilting his chair against the wall and pretending
to ignore the teacher, he caught Dottie looking at him. She flirted with her
eyes and he turned away, looking bored. She was too inexperienced to know he
had done it on purpose.
Calvin had hooked the uncatchable
Dottie Calhoun on the first cast.
VIII
They started dating after Calvin’s suspension ended. He was still wearing
t-shirts to school and serving detention every day in consequence. Dottie
struggled with her conscience. On the third day she went into the girls'
bathroom when she got to school, and rolled her skirt waist until her knees
showed.
In Detention, she sat behind Calvin and slid a note between the seats. "Meet
me at the soda fountain after we get out of here."
He sent one note back. It read, "Forget sodas. Meet me behind the
bleachers."
Dottie had never met a boy behind the bleachers. That was what girls did who
later went to visit far-off aunts.
IX
They didn't stay behind the bleachers. It was crowded there, even an hour after
school let out. They walked together to the parking lot and got into his car, a
two-year-old Chevrolet. Dottie could almost hear her mother's outraged gasp
when she slid onto the seat, her skirt once again above her knees. She banished
all thoughts of her mother.
They drove randomly until dark, and then Calvin pulled off onto the shoulder
under a tree that hid them almost completely from passing cars, if there had
been any.
He turned off the motor, rolled down his window to let in the sounds and smells
of an autumn night, and reached for her.
X
"I can't believe you even found a '57 Chevy," Dottie said. "It's
exactly like the one you had then."
"I know." Calvin looked towards her. In the dark, she was still the
17-year-old he'd taken parking 55 years ago. "I wanted it to be just like
that night."
"And modern cars are too cramped," Dottie said. "They don't have
these lovely bench seats." She sighed happily, and he leaned in to kiss
her. Just like that night 55 years before, his hand slipped up her shirt.
They'd made the usual mistakes and lived through the results. But this part was
always good.
Ah! Young love. I’d almost forgotten this…but I remember the prompt 😀
ReplyDeleteI had totally forgotten the story! That’s the best of doing an occasional flashback—it makes me look at old stories!
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